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Sunday, January 16, 2005

Sunday Morning!!



Chirping of Sparrows,
Giggling n Enjoying,
Beautiful Rain,
Rite outside my house!

squirrels hop n jump n go,
Saying hi to her neighbor's,
all at one go.

Tip-Top Tip-Top,
Droplets Of water fall,
Click Clock Click Clock
My Wrist Watch sounds
Giving rhymes n rhythms
to both my poem n nature
n to all.

Touching the floor,
with their gentle hands,
Cold they may be,
But luk soft like swans,
With a smile on their Face,
They all come down,
Wetting the floor,
From Clowds of town.

Oh luk at them,
They luk like,
thin strips of paper,
Oh listen to them,
There they swingle,
With gentle wind,
They move here n there,
All together,
Always in pairs,
Their color can make,
Anyone happy,
Scent they use,
Is always so pine n freshy,
If atall u ever walk near them,
After the rains,
Your feet will go tappy.

Any guesses anyone,
Fast they grow,
with all their *tanmann*

Grassyz are their names,
That's what they say,
Always very happy,
n helpingly play,
with all other creatures,
on this land!


Ahh luk at them now,
after the rains,
hey hey am talking about,
Flowers n not grassyz now :p

Fresh like Cherries
Plucked from trees,
Sweet like strawberries,
Ready to eat,
Gentle like momz hands,
Is their touch,
Sweet n Refreshing,
Is their scent.

They smile at u,
when u luk at them,
they make this world,
so beautiful.


I can go on n on,
describing these moments,
to myself n to all,
here I sit inside my room,
windows shut n curtains down.

I just heard a bird's squeak,
n sound of water droplets leak,
wind said a fasty hii,
grassyz told me bout their new baby,
flowerys told me their new story,
Trees taught me a gud lesson, :)
n Stony floor rite outside my door,
whispered in my ears,
that I shud rite another poem
on Rains n Cherries n Fruits n Grassyz,
on squirrels n Tweeties n Water Ponds,
On weeds n tweeds n pine n all,
on Sky n Atmosphere rite outside,
on Music n Harmony,
when they all come together,
n hey I don't want to miss this all.

SO here I go,
Opening my windowz,
n moving out the curtains,
so that I can hear them all
All together,
standing in a row,
here they screamingly say
Hi to all of u :)




9 Comments:

Blogger niddlesriddles said...

Hey Akshay! thankoooo :p

January 16, 2005 1:01 PM  
Blogger divya said...

a good expression of ur usual spirit..
so full of joy..

January 16, 2005 3:18 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey! Its really one of the best ones from you.
Guess!! Who is it :)

January 16, 2005 9:38 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

sush-- Any guesses anyone,
Fast they grow,
with all their *tanmann*

waah...kya khoob grow kiya:)...and y dont u start writin a classic in verse...200-300 pages tak likhna will not b some big thing for u...so start re..and lots of gud luck...likh..likh and likhte jaaao...:)

January 16, 2005 10:18 PM  
Blogger Surinder said...

wow ..another great poet in making :)

wonderful .. keep it coming :)..

January 20, 2005 12:19 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

mehak says...the template is simple n sober....u did not tell me bout this blog....

January 21, 2005 6:24 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi Nidhi ! Well, I think this is among the best poems by you. Its so 'chirpy' and has all of you in it, basking in the nature around you with which you seem so intrinsically linked. Very vivdly described... I couldn't help smiling my entire read through it.

- Burzin

January 22, 2005 1:21 PM  
Blogger a_sudonym said...

Hey nidhi!! long time!! Hows ya?? You shifted to this blog??

January 25, 2005 7:36 AM  
Blogger niddlesriddles said...

@Divy :p Thank uuuuuuuu :p

@ that'z u Niks :p my twinie thanks alot :p

@Sush hehe yeah i can really do that! :p i'll tak it as a compliment!

@Surnider POET! haha no reeeeeee.... but i'll try to come close to it :D thank u soo much :D
yup next one coming soon :p

@Mehak .. yeah i just changed it few days back! n about the blog there was nothing much..over here :)

@Burzin oopsy even u feel that.. thankooooooo :p hehe thatz so true! thanks alot for ur beautiful n smiley comment! :D n hey...keep smiling :D :)

@Sudhon Am fine! howz u????? update ur bloggy Suds! :D yuppy ...my bloggy needed a change! :p

@Melissa ..GREAT TO SEE U HERE! thank u so much..n how r ur fishyz doing?? :D

February 02, 2005 7:34 AM  

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